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Some speakers had good delivery, others read their notes, but you talked for far too long - you were asked for 10 to 12 minutes and did 30! There was often a lot of speech for one slide, and sometimes the font was too small. ** Overlong and lacking in focus.
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__Stéphanie__ Good delivery - easy to understand, good communication, but too long-winded - we don't need all this information, and you repeat yourself quite a lot. Pay attention to word stress.

deVELop conSUMers Handling conTAINers

to permit to give information > permits advertisers to give information make people want have > want to have in first time > to start, in the first part of our presentation a response of a real need > a response TO a real need

__Mélody__ (7) A little too quiet. You sound as though you have learned your text by heart and you don't look at all the audience, just the teacher. It is not always easy to understand you.

product > u like duck de-si-gned > de-signed (2 syllables) de-VE-loped three million of packaging

__Julien__ (10) A little too quiet, and lots of hesitation (uh, hein) The font size on your slides is far too small and the choice of content seems a little strange - why tell us about the colour of recycling bags?

__Christine__ (14) Good communication, good fluency, some rising intonation (try not to go up at the end of each statements). Look at the audience, not the screen. You use a lot of words to say quite simple things and repeat yourself a lot - perhaps more practice would help you be more concise.

on my third part packs, packagings > types of packaging to sensitize > to draw people's attention

ecolabels > pronunciation: a like day

__Pascal__ You sound rather hesitant, and you read your text - try to speak directly to the audience.

to think that there are more cereal > to make people think there is more cereal

__Vivien__ You overarticulate somewhat - you make too many stresses on your words and everything is a bit too loud. Pay attention to word stress (which syllables are stressed, and which are not).